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I look at me now by: Luis V
I look at me now
I look at what I’ve become
I look at me now on the balcony
I look at my chest
And I still see a hole inside
I don’t see my heart
All my pains are gone
The voices in my head are telling me
Now that you don’t feel pain
How about you slit that wrist of yours
I scream tell them to fuck off
But they don’t the voices get louder and louder
I told them you see my
You see my finger
You see my thumb
You see my fist
And then I punch them
My demons knocked down on the ground in shock
I see my eyes turn black
I see my horns come out
I see my black wings come out of my back
Now I just start beating them out of anger
They fight back
Now I’m stabbed from behind
It’s the fucking devil
I see him
His eyes blacker than mine
I’m bleeding
He told me to know my place
I told him I don’t have a place here
He shoved the pitchfork in deeper into my chest
My eyes starts closing
I see a light
I walk into that light
Just to see what my life would’ve been like if I became an angel
Now I’m dying
And heading to hell
But I don’t give up without a fight
I punch the devil
But it has no effect on him
He starts laughing and calls me pathetic
And finishes me off.
This light of mine by: Luis V
This light of mine goes dim tonight
Will I die tonight?
Flames are everywhere
I see Satan
Satan's presence is so dark
He wants me to make a reservation
My demons laugh at me
My heart is racing
Now I feel like I’m going to die
My anxiety brings me down
This light of mine goes dim tonight
Will I be alright?
No answer tonight
Now I just want to die
My demons and the devil are telling me
Slit your wrist
Be like Lizzy and you might end up killing yourself like she did
I started crying, My face turned red
Now I’m mad
I slit my wrist in front of them
They start laughing as I start screaming
But then My horns come in
Luis Demon is now taking control over my body
Stronger than ever
He kills my demons and tells the devil
I’m the only demon allowed in this kid
And he stabs the devil
The devil in shock poofed away
My demon said to me
I couldn’t just watch you and start slitting your wrist again
So I had to do something about it
I’m sorry it had to be like this though
I told him it’s fine
I was starting to regret it the minute I started doing
He gave me hug
And he went back inside of me
For once I felt at peace with my demon
I wonder what is he up to though.