Breath

Location

72023
United States
34° 57' 19.926" N, 92° 2' 48.894" W

Breathe.
Yes, breathe.
Just stop,
lets breathe.
Lets feel and heal
All of this is unreal.
Lets go
Its hard I know.
But if we just breathe,
Ill breathe with you.
Were together in this.
Formations, lets go.
Dallis is moving to slow.
Shots fly by
Its duck or die.
Heart pounding
wrists screaming
cotton mouth creeping
heat blistering
Vision misting
Blotches of red
Am I dead?

Please for the love of god

Let me breathe again.

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Comments

paigemgood

Support our troops

Ambrielle

Amazing! Always support!

savigirl14

Beautiful I like your choice of words

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