Castle in the Sky

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Invisible to your cowardess, a one word answer could let me rest.

Never did I expect myself to do this all again, and still I haven’t learned my lesson

Less is more and more means less, it’s a confusing world at its best

A light that shined so bright now has been dimmed, you somehow carry on without a whim

While I still stand oblivious by ignorance and eager bliss, a fool I’ve been to dream of your kiss

A friendship, yes I sought, but more than that has only brought distraught

So here I plead from you alone, give me pain, a burden you should not hold

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