A Corrupt Amity

Inside the lights, my eyes they hide, a daring act of life's first cry, the stars come out and do observe, a balancing act of love and nerve, the planets they dance around and soon, the sun will come and also the moon, a large display of magnificent action, but only a feaux satisfaction, for the moon and the sun, while they twirl with fun are not all what they appear to be.

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