Entering Bereavement

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Constant pulsating masses,
bring bile to a boil.

reality closes in,
hot, salty acid blurrs into a trickle.

Repulsive pounding causes a sway,
placid beauty is shaking.

Empty sacks gasp for meaning,
cavities crack and crumble in.

Dackered by a common notion,
whimsical erubescence flows--
a tainted honest tide.
Neurotic wails lacerate silk lining,
exposing cushy pales of pink and grey. 

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