Go On, They Say

Mon, 04/29/2013 - 20:10 -- jael

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10305
United States
40° 35' 39.8616" N, 74° 4' 16.0896" W

Go on,
they say.
Step into the water,
hold onto the ledge.
Kick your legs,
float.
Follow my lead,
they say.
Let me show you the way.
Lean on me,
I'll hold you.
I'll help you.
I listen, I follow.
Who am I,
not to do as they say?

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jael

A poem about mindless following

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