Her Essence (In A Man's View)

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10441 Sw 9th Lane
United States
45° 4' 3.4608" N, 89° 55' 34.626" W

Just hearing her name, makes me wild,

Her beautiful essence is mesmerizing,

I feel my chest beats rapidly,

The way she walks, full of grace.

Like flowers in early May

 

The perfume she wears, smells of apricot,

As she walks by, her essence lingers,

Like the smell of a strong sense,

 Of spices and herbs her long hair,

Ooooo, I could get lost in those.

 

Everything about her I love,

She fascinates me, her brown eyes,

Are so deep, they had me in daze for weeks.

 

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