Here I am?

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 22:42 -- sg1325

Here I lay
as helpless as you when you have the flu
defenseless
wanting love as you do
I eat I sleep I move
all of which we do together
I am in you
you and I are one
my only voice is yours
you see for me
sounds I hear through your ears
I want you to want me
I am here so why wouldn't you?
In the place before I saw many like me
come happy and excited
so I followed found you
in the hope that I won't end up like the others
those whose dreams were shattered
those who were deceived
will I ever see you?
or will you take back your promise to love me?
to fight for me?
will I go back to the Father heart broken
wanting him to patch up this fragile heart?

Comments

TyyeLove

I loved reading this:) The way you expressed the pain of love is unique. This happens to a lot of people, and it's so hard to express it to others. You defined it and expressed it accurately. Very Lovely.

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