Hot Water

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 Flowing,rushing,burning
They dance on my skin 
Slowing working its way up
The embers engulf my mind
Though it burns, it dissolves the memories
The flames grow faster 
But my thoughts fade slowly
My heart beats like a drum 
Coursing through my body 
It drowns out your voice
And the thought of your smile 
And for one split second your gone
I'm alone 
Then I feel the embers leaving 
Returning to the depths of the drain

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