i pledge the legions..............

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10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

i pledge the legions
to the flag of the city that never sleeps in america
and to the republic, which are racist
one nation, not under god (in which he cries....)
which is obviously visible
with no liberty and no justice to all

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ambercurry37

This poem is very powerful. It just shows that you can say a lot without using a lot of words. It points out the unfairness that the nation has imposed on all of its people. It's not just a race thing or a sex thing anymore; all people are discriminated against for one reason or another.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

its about people being under seige by government
we need to voice out and make changes
thanks 4 the support

smason5457

It's a harsh and brutal truth, but I'm glad that you brought it to light.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i say what i mean

i mean what i say

i say this in all sincerity

i thank you for your honest comment-very humble that you liked my poem

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