I'm Worried

Sun, 09/02/2012 - 12:12 -- Divine

Can I change? If you can take this plague from me.
Make it right. Fight for me.
Me myself I'm Drama-Free.
Cordial full of meekness and humility,and this is killing me.
I need a victory!
It seems like nobody is standing next to me, and I gotta deal with this tremendous feat.
I have been defeated a tripple threat attack.
Their intelligence was only by chance, but they have the upperhand,
TIME AS IT STANDS
I'M WORRIED

Comments

samueltfranklin

The continuous repetition of the word "me" really puts emphasis and pressure on the narrator, underscoring the narrator's worry and anxiety. It's a very strong indirect continuation of the poem's theme.

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