Individualism Made Me

Location

80521
United States
40° 35' 20.2776" N, 105° 8' 15.3276" W

I'm token cuz I'm broken tryna escape reality.
Tired of my mind, soul, body, my fuckin family.
I reside in the demise of suicide,
These thought's rushin in and outta my mind. Not fine.
Until I grew into who I am today.
It stays, never runs away.
So when you left me in this world all alone,
My true independent self was born.

And I appreciate it, the sense and hope that's free.
I love me, never lie to me.
When I rise don't remember my cries,
Just watch me shine and open up yo eyes.
To see, clearly.
The individualism I value. Me.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i sense anger, but also determination
anger because of what you had to endure, but determination because despite the hardships, you overcame it
what you do now is continue to inspire in being greater, as a person and writer
great job

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