Last rites

1 Corinthians 6:9     New English Translation

9 Do you not know that the unrighteous will not inherit the kingdom of God? Do not be deceived.

 

Last rites

 

Symptoms of the passive, I guess these are many

Some of these duplicate in other characteristics

Life is elementary if you close your eyes and sleep

Maybe it is not living but only a form of logistics

 

These things are to be discovered just within self

It makes it worth the living to figure out who you are

You really don’t need to like the things that you discover

You have to address them and not search too far

 

Remembrance by notes, I guess we all should do that

Talking to concentrate well really to talk to forget

Crutches to assist in life, I know most of us to have them

While your senses grow dull as we’re caught in a net

 

Jan Wienen

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