Looking At The Dark Side of The Moon

 

The Man on the Moon can control the tides in my eyes.

Looking at his dark side,

you can't see his intentions.



You expect nothing.

The Man on the Moon is taking his daily 24 hour trips,

Never noticing his many faces.



Finally you see his full face.

The tides are pouring out your soul,

But he doesn't seem to notice nor be phased.

 

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