Magnificent Man

Location

30248
United States
33° 21' 53.0352" N, 84° 4' 48.5796" W

Why do I ponder about you during the day?
Your face, your laugh, everything you say.
Its wonderful the way you make me feel.
It's the immense torture of your appeal.
The feel of your touch brings me chills.
But for now your voice is my own thrill.
You tell me i'm beautiful and can tell my future.
In my past, you forget that majestic creature.
The one where we joined, it was great but
like real life there are mistakes.
I lied and felt bad while you went away.
To make it worse, sorry is all i could say.
I look back now and you still lingered.
I thank God you never thought, 'I should leave her'.
I saw your personality but it took time.
You promised me forever you would be mine.

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