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janalentz's verse:
 
Stroke me.
Ignite me.
Set me on fire with your love.
Electrify me.
Seduce me.
Soften my hard edges.
Kiss me.
Hug me.
Make all my fears go away.
 
Let me fall in love with you.
Entwined, entangled, embroiled.
I'll let you fall in love with me.
 
mvp-most valuable poet's verse:
 
caress you
kindle you
i'll light you up with warmth that sensationalize comfort
strike you
allure you
tender your hard exterior that have soft spots waiting to explode in the interior
kiss you
hold you
annihilate any insecurities you have, it all goes away with love (especially when a special person gives love an actual meaning)
 
let you fall in love with me
intertwining, entangling, honoring
once again, you will fall in love with me

 

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Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

it's an honor to collaborate with you on a wonderful poem that speaks about the importance of love, and warmth of two people (in general) that truly know how to desire one another

well said jana :)

JanaLentz

9 years ago

It was such an honor to work with a poetic mastermind like you, MVP! This one was awesome despite the shortness. Simplistically beautiful! :) 

 

Hope to work with you again! :)

 

<3

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

i'm humble to collaborate this poem with you, it's incredibly amazing

wonderful effort, you are a terrific writer, continue to build off your creativity

always remember this,poetry have no limits

as author(s), one dictates expression of how to inspire viewers, never look at it as how long or short, it's all about the quality itself

i definitely look forward to collaborate with you in writing more poems together.

dolvas

9 years ago

Great collaboration. ..

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you

just displaying great artistry

 

TORY WHITE

9 years ago

That was awesome

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thanks brother

it was a great collaboration

TORY WHITE

9 years ago

That was awesome

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thanks

dolvas

9 years ago

Great collaboration

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thanks

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