One Too Many

Thu, 04/27/2017 - 23:22 -- rickm1

Today, of all days, why today?

How could such a thing happen?

I’d be lying if I said I had nothing to say

No one was laughin’ or clappin’

I never thought I’d see this

Never so close, to such a degree

It was just so amiss

Unbelievably gross to see

Everyone decided to flee,

And yes that includes me

I know, I know, hypocrisy

But who was willing to help in this time of need

It’s just my curiosity

I know how much this made the country bleed

I mean honestly, could we show more unity?

This is still bothering me, it’s just crazy

It’s caused so much uncertainty

So many people were hurt and marked forever

So many lost under the dirt and never.....found

How sad, how much hate was needed to do it

All the work that it took to brew it

The pilots that accomplished this tragedy

Had to be in a state of insanity, committing this blasphemy

At least, that’s what it was to me

This can’t be what He wanted, it can’t be

It was alarmingly the worst catastrophe I’ve ever witnessed

Nothing to be diminished

Once the act was finished,

It was distinguished as the deadliest strike in the U.S.

That spot can never be replenished

Those killed, just vanished

Those pilots, banished

Not by us but perhaps by Him, if He existed

He’d know that His laws were twisted

Or perhaps their minds were misted

I’ll never know, we’ll never know

But many don’t need to

Because it was something they did indeed do

And it only takes one deed to be hated

One event and all hell is created,

Everyone devastated, and so many now irritated

But to be educated is to know that bricks are put on one by one

But it only takes one to knock down the sum

And that is what we cannot overcome

This poem is about: 
My country
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rickm1

Hopefully, you can infer that my poem is referring to the September 11th, 2001 attack on the World Trade Center.

In this poem, I portray a character who criticizes how divided the country is, but they themselves are culprits of contributing to the division of the country (I placed this hypocrisy on purpose). Through this poem, I not only criticize the state and mentality of the country but also the people who decide to speak about it. I have seen and heard much hypocrisy in the things people say and in their background and/or past actions. I hope to encourage you to question things on a deeper level to try to gain insight into how humans behave and react to significant events, and what the core human flaws are.

Thank you

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