Purity

Location

Reunion Island
France
46° 13' 39.4968" N, 2° 12' 49.4964" E

I watched my feather fly away while listening to the breeze of the filaos trees

   I felt it's fleeting stroke against the palm of my hand, gentle like the singing merles of this land

         I watched my feather fly away and I ache for it's purity as much as it aches for its surity that it                         once existed as an angel of the sky

               Flying high

                     Unstoppable

                 

                

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Comments

Scapecrow

Oh, that was so touching! Please, keep writing more like this beautiful poem. : )

carpediem

thank you, that means a lot :)

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