'Sharp' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 4/3/2015

Location

United Kingdom

Now Lemme' Deal With This QUICK This ISN'T A Diss... !!!
But If Iron Sharpens IRON... ?!?
Then I'm The RHYMING ... IRON Mike Tyson ... !!!!!
ORIGINAL Like... Dyson...
CLASHING Cos' I'm TITAN... !!!
STRAIGHT UP Wesley SNIPING... !!!
Lyrically EXCITING....... !!!
ALIEN To Sightings of Groundless Big Virge Writings... !!!

SHARP Like Sharks ...
Whose Path's To Hunt Down ARKS...
FILLED UP With WEAK Hearts...
Whose Path Is CONFUSED... ?!?
Cos' They Just CAN'T REMOVE Their Historical TRUTH.... !!!
That THEY Come From Crews...
Whose Past Was To Choose To ABUSE Using NOOSE... !!!!!!
As If That Would Chart A Way To Believing...
Themselves To Be Beings... ABOVE OPEN Ceilings... !?!?!
They're CLEARLY DECEIVING Themselves With Their Teachings...
SHARPNESS Dulled That SHOULD BE ANNULLED... !!!!!
My Sharpness DEMANDS Knowledge... ADVANCED...
Beyond Those Who Hold STANCE......
Where HATRED Embarks Upon SEPARATIST CHANTS... !!!!!
I'm SHARP When I CHANCE And Commune With THE CHEST...
Where SHARPNESS Is Blessed With STANDING The TEST...
of EXPRESSING Wth STRENGTH And STARING At DEATH...
WITHOUT ............. Bullet Proof Vest ................... !!!!!
I TRAIN To STAY SHARP So My MENTAL Is CHARGED...
To Stay Steps AHEAD of... PRESSURES Today... !!!!!
Because I'm NOW Aged Beyond Being Teenaged...
And Am NOW Not As Strong As My Younger Self Was... !!!
So Now HAVE To THINK Before Using My Fists....
Or Guns FILLED With Clips So That I Can LIVE... !!!!!!
WITHOUT Facing Heads Whose Sharpness Is Left...
of Good Ol' Common Sense... !!!
Cos' It SURELY Ain't RIGHT How They're NOW Taking Lives... !!!!
Gunfights And Knives Now DRAWN To SURPRISE To ROB SOMEONE's BIKE... ?!?
These Words Are NOT THINGS MADE UP From My Mind... !!!
My Mind Is Inclined To KEEP Well Advised of Modern Day Crimes...
That RUN WILD Like FIRE... I WILL NOT RETIRE... !!!!!
The Thing That Kickstarts My Days of Existence And Furthermore LIVING... !!!
Which Is Why I MARK CARDS With Words I... IMPART...
That Just KEEP ON PROVING...
That I... Like My Mind Keep It Moving...

..... And .....

.......... " SHARP " .........

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
Our world
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Comments

DOYIN TRACEY

You have so much to say... And it is great. But I feel like your thoughts were all over....that you had so much to say and you said it all at once....that you lost a consistent line of thought. You have so much to say...and would love to hear it...you seem like you hold infinite wonderful things to say... and you get lost in trying to say them all at once...slow down...write even 1000 poems.... i want to get what you are saying....❤❤

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