Tar Pits

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Her eyes protrude

the needle cuts through her vein

she can't escape

the emotional pain

 

It flows in her blood

a contaminating stain

She lost control

there's nothing to gain

 

Forever consumed

She's gone insane

No one can save her

the emotional pain

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