While You're Away

Location

97306
United States
44° 50' 39.5088" N, 123° 4' 34.1616" W

The tears in my eyes,
Made the world fuzzy and unfamiliar.
But I have to be strong,
For me and mom,
For brother and father.
You say the army will treat you well,
And I can only hope it’s true.
The time apart will be hard,
And the future will be unpredictable.
You are strength and power,
If you can do this, we can too.

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laynemiranda13@yahoo.com

This poem is for my older brother, who has given his time and all of his efforts into protecting these United States and these free living people. I love him and thank him for inspiring my life and inspiring this poem.

liquidmusic

It's beautiful

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