that woman

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over 5 billion people in the world

ratio of three women to one man

that woman is the one i want

the way she smiles

the way she struts

the way the click of her heels sound when she walks

i'm mesmorize by her presence

she know i'm watching her

but at the same time she know i'm not quenching for that thirst like dudes that never

saw a woman in their lives before

none the less

that woman right there

is the one i want

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Angelwith1wing

"over 5 billion people in the world
ratio of three women to one man
that woman is the one i want"
 
Aw, how sweet. This poem really does show the love someone can have for a person by picking that someone special out of a "billion" faces to be yours. I like how you show that love and something more. With the lines:
 
"she know i'm watching her
but at the same time she know i'm not quenching for that thirst like dudes that never saw a woman in their lives before"
 
...you express this tone that youre not into wanting her for sex, but for love and to hold forever. Unlike these boys, you want that woman to express your love, commitment, and trust to; not to use her for lust. I hope I got the message of your poem. If not, message me and I'll try to interpret it again. Like the poem. Keep writing on my friend. 
 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

again

this is a poem that speak merit and truth

its about adoring that woman for all she is

there are females all over, but a batch that are actually women

its about guys acting like men

thank you for the luv and support

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