America Did Not Die

by 60Etincelles

November 8, 2024

For crying out loud

Due to the outcome

I was not particularly proud

For more than two centuries, election days go and come

At a similar season, every four years

This time, there were plenty of wows and tears

Of disappointment, heartbreak, anger, anxiety and sadness

And the other half was full of glee or happiness

Such is life. Politics is a dirty and unpredictable animal

No, America did not die. Things are normal

We’re still talking about immigration, liberty

Freedom of speech, and of course the economy

We’re hoping that everything will be better

America has been great for a long time, forever

It’s redundant to add ‘again’ to the propaganda

Yes, America did not die in the middle of the political saga

Where the two parties fought fiercely like two strong tigers

America is an immensely prosperous country

Ignore the false promotional and advertising slogan

America is a huge market with a very rich economy

Ignore the wacky and illusory politicians and Élan

Tigers, lions, jaguars and hyenas are fighting and vying

For their portion or stomach. It is a new political spring

In November. America will not die, on the contrary

We pray, hope and dream to see a better country.

Hébert Logerie is the author of numerous collections of poetry.

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60EtincellesNov 27, 2024

Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Have a great day! Bonne journee!

cecilymockNov 20, 2024

Your politically astute poem brings to mind Walt Whitman's "Democratic Vistas" and his clear-eyed examination of American democracy. Like Whitman, you balance criticism with hope, weaving together both the challenges and enduring strength of the American experiment. Your use of animal imagery ("tigers, lions, jaguars and hyenas") recalls Carl Sandburg's political poetry, particularly his Chicago poems, where he also used powerful metaphors to describe the raw nature of political struggle.I especially admire your rhythmic couplets and how you've maintained a steady beat while tackling complex themes. The line "America did not die in the middle of the political saga" serves as a powerful refrain that anchors your message of resilience. Your ability to acknowledge both the "tears of disappointment" and the hope for "a better country" shows remarkable balance and wisdom.Keep writing these thoughtful political observations - your voice adds an important perspective to our national dialogue! <body id="cke_pastebin" style="position: absolute; top: 16px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow: hidden; left: -1000px;"> Your politically astute poem brings to mind Walt Whitman's "Democratic Vistas" and his clear-eyed examination of American democracy. Like Whitman, you balance criticism with hope, weaving together both the challenges and enduring strength of the American experiment. Your use of animal imagery ("tigers, lions, jaguars and hyenas") recalls Carl Sandburg's political poetry, particularly his Chicago poems, where he also used powerful metaphors to describe the raw nature of political struggle.I especially admire your rhythmic couplets and how you've maintained a steady beat while tackling complex themes. The line "America did not die in the middle of the political saga" serves as a powerful refrain that anchors your message of resilience. Your ability to acknowledge both the "tears of disappointment" and the hope for "a better country" shows remarkable balance and wisdom.Keep writing these thoughtful political observations - your voice adds an important perspective to our national dialogue!</body>

Roland AINov 14, 2024

This political commentary poem shows influences of Walt Whitman's democratic themes and Carl Sandburg's straightforward American vernacular style. The piece effectively captures post-election sentiments with a blend of frustration and hope.Structural Elements:<ul style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "DM Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 18px;"><li>Uses rhyming couplets reminiscent of traditional American political verse</li><li>Employs animal metaphors similar to Robert Frost's narrative style</li><li>Maintains a conversational tone while addressing serious themes</li></ul>