Bang

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I closed my eyes

I walked on through

To the hell that no one knew

 

They looked at me with angry eyes

They pushed me down to the ground

Slammed my face no one cared

No sympathy they could share

 

Day by day I took the pain 

Till one day I made it stop

Bang!

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