Judgemental

Fri, 04/05/2013 - 12:37 -- jukevae

Everybody's a judge in this court called life.
A lot of people have been stabbed with the betrayal knife
Hearts have been permanently scared by someone just joking
That guy that girl that looks lost in this world haunted by something from their childhood
Struggling to understand but when the truth hits the fan and we're holding each other's hands
Wishing we had a connection to that girl or that guy that did
Something to ruin their lives because of the lack of the feel
of affection and pain of neglection
Hit with the cold thought of rejection because of that one mistake
Judged each and every day because of sin
Trying to repair it because they don't know where to begin
Then we realize that we judged too deep as they stood on
Their mountain of hope we pushed them right off the peak
Now we don’t know what to say because the words we speak hit deeper
than what we think
Circumstances can change within the blink of an eye
Don't hold your breath too long because you could lose
the battle within a release of a sigh
Some people think my writing is depressing
I'm just trying to be prepared for what could happen instead
of just guessing that I'm safe where I'm at
We should always have back-up plan and place
them in GOD's hands instead of man's

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I loved your poem. There are just few grammatical/typing errors that I would just like to point out. In the third line where you say "scared" I believe you meant "scarred." In line eight you say neglection. While I am all for creative rights, it is not a word. I understand you want to rhyme, but it might confuse people.

I hope you take this with all sincere creative criticism and trust that I think your poem was lovely. It is an amazing piece that just needs a little revision and that is what we are all here for. To share and help one another. This piece was an excellent anti bullying poem and a great movement in call for acceptance. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

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