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One, lonely guy standing in darkness
Two, friends talking about girls
three, people walking away
four, people who meet again
five, people who don't talk
six, lies told to each person
seven, minutes later
eight, people have a fight
nine, people walk away
leaving
One lonely guy again,

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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