Nothing to say when you're dead

What would happen
would anyone know
would anyone care
would they even miss me
would they wish
that they had said what they didn't
or take back anything they did
would they notice
but i don't want to think about it
to think that people would actually care
after you're not there
it's funny really
when you're dead
with nothing left to say
people actually start listening

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

sad reality is this poem tells the honest truth
you express yourself sincerly, i felt the words behind the style you said it
keep writing
hopefully , people can make amends to what they did wrong to you

savigirl14

Very powerful

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