Ocean
The Deepest part of the ocean is where many things lie.
Things we may never completely grasp with logic, or witness with our own eyes.
That deep part of the Ocean is where reality & imagination intertwine.
The Deepest part of the ocean is where secrets live in shadows
where her soiled conscious lies.
The Deepest part of the ocean is where love can stand the test of time.
The Deepest part of the ocean is where the beauty of coral & the depth of
darkeness intertwine.
Who would have ever fathomed my heart, my soul would live within the deepest
part of the ocean shackled like an anchor.
Where the unimaginable lies.
By: T.J.
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Abstract ocean metaphor for inner self, blends philosophical depth with personal revelation.
Multiple layered ideas about ocean, secrets, love, beauty compressed densely throughout.
Mixed: melancholic introspection and confinement balanced against beauty and love endurance.
Contemplative repetition creates steady momentum; declarative tone lacks explosive urgency or dynamics.
Approximately 20-25 lines; falls in mid-range 16-30 line category.
Rich metaphor of ocean as psyche; personification, simile, symbolic imagery throughout.
Predominantly lyric internal voice; minimal narrative or dramatic persona development.
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