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A Sinking Ship


 

Picking up the pieces along the way,

The crew tries desperately to save the day.

Leaving the mast behind,

They block the past from their minds.

They look forward, with rum in hand,

Thinking of the sun, the beach, and the sand.

Aimlessly, they voyage ahead,

With not one clear thought amongst their heads.

So, off they go in a ship that's dying,

And not a care they carry, for they could be flying.

Alas, just wait a moment or so,

For they will not go far, you know.

And as the broken mast floats away, 

The ship continues to sink, day-to-day.

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments (1)

LittleBear
<p>You write about these sailors as if they no longer mind that their lives are coming to an end. They can do nothing to change it, and now they just go with it. Sometimes I think everyone feels this way at one point. On those days when everything seems to be going wrong, you just accept it instead of getting upset. I love the way you worded this piece. Keep it up. LB</p>

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