You call it nothing
You call it nothing
telling me everyone goes through it
but does that make it better?
You proved the world is cruel in two words
Making me look weak and sensitive
And most importantly admitting everyone goes through it
which is sad since no one deserves to get hit by rude words or get hit psychially
In this cruel world, bullying will never be taken seriously
You call it nothing
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Primarily personal/autobiographical about bullying experience, minimal abstraction.
Multiple ideas densely packed; repetition and layering create moderate ideational density.
Strongly negative; focuses on cruelty, pain, dismissal, weakness, injustice throughout.
Intense emotional voice; urgent questioning and accusatory tone create high kinetic force.
Approximately 9-10 lines; fits 7-15 line range (score 3-4, closer to 3).
Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative with one mild personification (world is cruel).
Pure lyric internal voice; direct address but entirely subjective emotional expression.
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