Poems from dancinglibrarian

if you read a poem of mine please leave constructive criticism, one of my haikus got 25 reads and it wasn't even a haiku(middle line had 8 syllables not 7) wattpad: divinetea
gone too soon...
a bolt of lightening stuck me   down from the very same sky filled     with the very same clouds i flew through  for answers.     my heart...
i never understood  what it meant when people would say dare to utter the Forbidden word  love i asked questions; defined answers, short...
 Numb to all the pain                            Pain that people have caused                                              People that hate...
tears spilled in closet nobody knows or cares i'm alone again

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