I love it! It's what's inside that really counts. Letters on a piece of paper are forgotten when you die. Your face, actions, deeds, personality, and your love is what will be missed when you are gone. I love your poem, and love your title; that was creative!

These words sound so sad, so opressed. 
They are the sound of an individual who has accepted their situation 
and decided to conform to it for the time being, despite their yearning to rebel. 
All in all, I enjoyed this read.

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Of all the poems I've read on this site, this is by far my favorite. Such a passionate poem, love it so much 

A m a z i n g. 

This is amazing! I'm new to this site and this makes me all the more excited to read and write poetry!

This..... Wow. 

I can completely relate with this. 

absolutely love it!! 

I can relate to that. You've got a spark. Go with it and see where it takes you. I'll keep reading. :)

As someone who is currently applying for college and scholarships I can totally relate to this. I really like how you've written it with a high gpa and test scores, because it shows that even people who are "smart" and good at the tests and systems are frustrated by them.

I can really relate to this

Woah! I legit just wrote a similar poem. I feel the same.

http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/our-green-world

I love this piece. Your expressing what your feeling and that it the best thing you can do. 

Love that bit of sarcasm at the end.

Amazing. great flow!

wow this is by far one of the best poems ive read on here

Wow. This piece is totally brill. Love the meaning as well as the diction, the structure, the alliteration. Even the name has a powerful connection to the meaning of the poem. Great job, PresidentLeahy! 

Nice :) I enjoyed reading something that probably every student can relate to. And it sucks, but your poem is good and made me inspired to start writing :] thanks. 

You have dotted the i's and crossed the t's, this is truelly what has taken over me

wow. amazing. 

Wow. Just wow.

This absolutely amazing, I love every single line.

Amazing choice of words.

http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/un-blurred

This poem is prime! I love it's gutsy tone and I think it perfectly describes how a lot of students feel.

i can totally relate to this, lovely poem (:

Riggght! How does one measure feelings and hope b/c i believe the best things in life are unseen... But is anything as in our behaviors really unseen? These are things you can see just cant scientically measure it which doesnt make it any less important! YEES, Shove it up thier "Application Process!" Poem on FLEEK!

I absolutely love this. The impersonal quality of standardized testing and rating by numbers in school is expressed so well, keep it up!

I absolutely love this. The impersonal quality of standardized testing and rating by numbers in school is expressed so well, keep it up!