Alone

Mon, 03/02/2015 - 09:49 -- ENicks
A body falling, A loud scream. 
No earthy folly, No mere beam. 
Blood streaming, all around. 
My hands trembling, bleeding profound. 
"What have I done?" I question myself. 
No life around me, just still forms. 
Metal clanging, hitting the ground. 
My hands now empty. I'm all alone.

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shawnytucker

Its amazing how deep thus short poem is!

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