Defining moment

The whoosh of the silk

the murmer of the crowd

the twinkle in the two lovers eyes

this was their defining moment

fingers linked, they took their first steps onto the waxed floor

BANG!

the gunshot rang out

the silk no longer white

that was the defining moment

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