Do You Notice Me?

Here I am.


I try not to stare.


"Do you notice me?" I think


As I pull back my hair.


 


Do you actually see me


or just the girl I show?


Do you want to see me?


Or will you say no?


 


But I try to talk to you


You just look away.


Should I just leave


Or should I try to stay?


 


If I show the real me


Will you listen


Or will you just leave?


If I show the real me.


 


So as I talk,


And as you tune in,


I here myself say


Will you stay?

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