Drowning

Beneath the waves

My bowed head slips

Cold water flows

Right through my lips

I’m going to drown

I know it’s fate

I admit defeat

My life, I hate

I am consumed

By darkness complete

Now I am doomed

The air was sweet

But now I lack

The source of life

Finally…

All goes black...

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

upnorthdavid

What can I say? I didn't want to read it, but it was so captivating, I couldn't stop. Good poem

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