Endless Pit

Falling in the hypnotizing trance of love
Is the stupidest thing you can ever do
Why do you think it is called "falling" in love?
Taking interest causes lack of balance,
Liking them causes you to trip
If you do not grip onto the edge quickly, you will fall
You will fall deeper and deeper into the illusion of "love" until you grab onto a rock
That rock can easily come loose...
 
Unrequited love sends you chest first 
Down onto the long spike at the "bottom"
If you refuse to attempt escape, 
The spike will pierce you more and more,
Day by day...
 
Remember, 
The more you fall, the more momentum
Plus, 
The deeper you fall, the harder to get out
 
You will be eternally trapped
If no one come to your rescue
 
If someone lowers down a rope, 
and encourages you
to climb the rescue device
Then, you may just end up in another endless pit
 
There is the microscopic chance that the spike will not pierce your heart
If you are both profoundly in love
But, if one of you were to lose your life...
The spike will pin you, worse than even, before
 
So just take my advice:
NEVER fall in love...

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