Even Flow

one mark on the floor
one beat of the gun
a chance to have a bit of fun
to radiate with a heart of escape

sealed by fate
the spinning wheel keeps turning
a tender heart is yearning
sadness fills the country air

why should i brag to care
to treasure a rose plucked a time before

This poem is about: 
My country

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