The Evening Sun

My feet soak into the sand
as small grains seep between my toes.
Hand-in-hand walking with my love,
I gaze into the sunset.

The ball in the sky
dips down
and kisses the sea.
Colors illuminate my eyes-
radiating deep reds, yellows and violets.

A reflection of the sun
stretches across the sea
as it paints the sky
with colors of love.

The sea waves
as I walk by
and smile into the sunset.
Walking with my love,
Hand-in-hand we treasure the painting
that God drew us in the distance.

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