Fallen #5

Old old old---old old old---old old old 

the systems we chain ourselved within

a rusty dusty vulture sucking out our love

the dreams we once had are gone they are lost 

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upnorthdavid

5 years ago

Love the self-evaluation on the bio...

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

5 years ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate it. Hope you had a wonderful 2018. 

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