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Falling From Grace


"I wake up everyday looking upon the creations as they build.

I see that they are smart and I receive chills.

Everyday, they evolve and add points to their souls.

I dance on the moon and fly as I invent the crows.

I grant them gold and other shines to mold-

Their society and as they grow. I see a chance for war.

I recieve a sensation to my very core.

I wonder, Does Father know?

Not possible, he is much too old.

I continue to hurt them and shape their minds.

I think ill stay and take away the kind.

I grow in their hearts and finally Father has something he wants to say.

Lucifer, What hast thou done?

I reply i just don't know. For i have been drinking rum.

I was carried away into my corruption.

I invented evil and seduction

He replies  I grant you the name of Satan for you are cursed.

You gave them axes and blades and invented evil birds.

It would seem I have been defaced and i have finally fallen from grace."

- Jasen Scarbrough 5:23 am 8/7/2017

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Irregulos

I grew up in the mountains of West Virginia. A lonely child who loved writing music and poetry. Reading the bible, and going to church, confused at a young age. I found an outlet for my rage due to isolation. I hope you enjoy my poetry. Have a nice day.

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Irregulos
<p>Oh it&#39;s no problem at all, man. Thank you for the compliments, I&#39;ll always give respect to anyone with a compliment or constructive critical advice either way.</p>
MARs
Oh I'm terribly sorry, I don't know who the MARs you're talking about. I'm just a poet on here, not famous or anything. I'm awfully sorry for any confusion.
Irregulos
<p style="text-align: justify;">I am highly humbled by the words you have spoken today. Thank you so much. I hope to get into music soon. Im working on paying to go and learn music production. If this is the real MARS, im a huge fan of yours.</p>
MARs
Wow. This is so incredibly amazing! The verses, the structure, the process of Lucifer's corruption of the human heart, it's all so well written. This seems like a poem that you'd find in a book of the old great poets. Very very VERY well written.

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