As the Feather Fell

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Laguna-Acoma High School
United States

She stood there

and cried

watching the

traditions fade away.

 

As the Feather fell

So went her identity

who she was, and

where she came from.

 

As the feather fell

Her traditions

Fell too.

 

She watched

her family fade away.

She watched everything she

became, go to pieces.

 

As the Feather Fell 

So went her future.

As the feather fell 

So went her identity.

 

As the Feather Fell.

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