First Love

Mon, 08/26/2013 - 20:28 -- awade

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28334
United States
35° 14' 13.0704" N, 78° 31' 14.34" W
28334
United States
35° 14' 13.0704" N, 78° 31' 14.34" W

my heart is thumping

my face is flushed

he told me he loved me by the way he touched

that boy has got me spinning

my heart is the thing he is winning

I fall for him everyday

when I am around him I barely know what to say

all I want to do is be in his arms

surrounded and wrapped in his charms

his charms that I love so much

they make me feel so weak like I need to be on a crutch

I wish he would stop all this playing and be truly with me

I really want to be with him and everyone can see

I don't know if he really likes me cuz he likes to play

I try to give him hints but he doesnt get it, I can go on for days

I don't know how much longer I can go on

I am gonna give up before long

I hope he realizes before I go and do that

I really, truly love him and that's a fact

Comments

SarahEarth

your poem is soo nice!! and full of your feelings!!

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