Forgotten and Remembered
The tsunami hit at 11 today,
by 12 everyone knew,
by 2 help was there with cameras filming,
by 4 people had cried their faux tears,
by 6 news was up online,
by 8 calls were made only to be cut short,
by 10 cards were sent with $1 hearts,
and by 12 all was forgotten.
The volcano erupted at 11 today,
by 12 hundreds had died,
by 2 thousands were suffocating,
by 4 the wails of families echoed through the island,
by 6 the cries simmered down to sniffles,
by 8 people cleaned the ashes of the volcano and the dead,
by 10 flowers were laid with tearful farewells,
and by 12 all was remembered.
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