Heartfelt Pain

Sat, 05/17/2014 - 13:18 -- B.Mitch

It Feels Like Ive Lost Her,

Forever, Infinity.

Once Its Gone Its Gone,

Like Losing Your Virginity.

Warm Skin And Cold Hearts,

The Naked Eye Can Barely Tell,

But I See Right Thru Her

Like Lookin Thru A Jail Cell.

Not A Little Bit Phases Me,

Although It Still Hurts,

When She Smiles It Amazes Me.

Eats Me Alive ,

Sending Shots To My Brain,

So I Just Stand Out In The Rain,

Because Nothings The Same

Just Thinkin About It All,

With This HeartFelt Pain...

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B.Mitch

Writing from an experience

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