how about i take u...on a journey...lets see if u can hang...

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60616
United States
41° 50' 25.224" N, 87° 36' 49.3236" W

if u see me
its more of what u want
than what i am
if u hear me
its more of what u feel
than what i said
when u feel me
its more of what u imagine
than the sensation of my touch
cuz da essence of my being intertwined wit da creativity of ur conscience seems 2 excite ur senses
but the God and me
can only let u be
within a limited space
cuz c this place
that i am destined to be
wont be limited to the desires of u and me
for i kno there is somethin better
......
because
better is me
and i am
who god created me to be
so when the storm comes
he will guide me
to new levels
and these new areas of predestined awesomeness
created by my maker
is best at its point of beautiful rawness
because
my make-up is plain
my attitude the same
and there is no game needed
Cuz see unlike these
picked apart
shook up
and torn down losers
i am better
not because i havent been there
but because i never
let my mistakes hinder me
let bad decisions blender me
and let the words of young fools
be the end of me
cuz i serve a God who said
no weapon formed against me shall prosper
now im standin here like biggie
askin "who shot ya?"
cuz u lookin real puzzled
by the fact that im still standin
cuz while u were romancin
sweet drama
in everyone's ear
i was sittin back
being relaxed
cuz the devil has no authority here
so just go
be you
cuz im definitely gon be me
cuz at the end of the day that all i can be
but the real question is....

R U READY??

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