I am who I am

Mon, 03/16/2020 - 04:44 -- Peris

Don't underestimate me,  I am who I am I will not be the silent pleasure you want  me to be nor the short lived happiness you fee When you don't know me, how could you underestimate or judge me Your judgement of who I am is but a mere understanding of your thoughts alone Your thoughts of who I am are of no importance to me I am who I am and will only be who I know how to be, myself. 

This poem is about: 
My community
Our world

Comments

Annette M Velasquez

Honest and assertive with a powerful tone... a bit short though, the reader wants more! You could expand on this as it really is an empowering message.

Peris

Thank you for your input.  I did some changes. 
Please have a look again and let me in on your thoughts.

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