I was drowning

Mon, 06/04/2018 - 15:53 -- judlam3

You gave me your hand

So I thought you could

Pull me up to stand

But you misunderstood

And left me for land

You thought I would

Smile and understand

But I think you should

Eat some sand

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

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