I've Looked

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I look to the world,

And feel burdened

By life that clings, difficult to shake off.

 

I look to my city,

And feel enslaved

By copious opportunities, experiences.

 

I look to my community,

And feel destitute

By full bellies, warmth.

 

I look to my school,

And feel tormented

By knowledge imported, gain.

 

I look to my friends,

And feel persecuted

By helpful concern, attentive ears.

 

I look to my family,

And feel abused

By love-filled actions, faces.

 

I look to myself,

And feel oppressed

By open perspectives, unlimited.

 

As I close my eyes,

I'm reminded

Of silver linings in darkened skies.

Comments

L_Escalante

Darkened happiness is more common than any other, and so we must appreciate.

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