The last kiss

Sun, 02/15/2015 - 17:03 -- Stigo
 
 
 
Like slimy water falls to the sole of 
my feet's cave, 
when felt wet like early down dew, 
her lip shines, 
though did not use the reddish sticky 
stick.
 
Then was I quick, like grabbing fairy-
tales, -
as her right foot toes stood firm on a 
journey's flight.
If goodbye was the saddest, her kiss 
called smiles from the hurts.
 
 
                          Stigo de poet
 

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